so I was a terrible voice actor with my animation. luckily there was a very talented voice actor named strat varius ( http://www.youtube.com/user/TheStratVarius ) . he sent me a voice act of exactly what I said and it sounds 1000 times better. so go check the video out

animation: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCkbe4L7Iyc
I also made it all on live-stream : https://new.livestream.com/accounts/2696192/even ts/1844669