its amazing the story had me in tears, the art was amazing and the sound was like music to my ears.
lol r u ok ? heres a tissue 4 u :')
hmm i like it but something feels...missing. like, some of the backrounds were great and some were just made in like 5-10 minutes. overall its great. although in the begining the animation looked much more fluid and it would be great if the whole thing was like that.
thanks for the review, i really appreciate it.
ok so i can steal the audio from a game grumps animated, what about stealing audio from a video telling me to steal the audio????
well this will be quite a long review so here i go.
first, this animation was amazing, howver, i dont entirely agree with you. judgin is what gets in life. we all do it but cant help it. i mean im not going to want to go down a suspicious aly way in fear something bad might happen. its human instinct. people are going to judge everything from how tustworthy someone is, down to the little things like my animation skills
Thanks a lot. I totally understand what you're getting at and it's true. By nature we do have to judge to stay safe but problem is most of the time more people judge than live their life to the fullest. Thanks for your review and keep up the good work on your animations :)
you know what? i actually like it. the lip syncing has improved alot, backrounds look clean and styleish, fluid animation, story is now quite good. (im not gonna lie i did laugh at 4:56) overall you improve quite fast misty
Thank you, that means a lot to me.
wow...all i can say is wow. this is extreemly impresive. this is a crazy improvment from anything else u have made. the body movement really fit the lip syncing and made it look quite styleish. the lip syncing actually fit the charecters extreemly well and i will admit i had a couple laphs at this too. the effort u put into this was very worth it. i can tell u put a loooot of time into this because of how much frame by frame there is and the length. u really have a bright futer in animation, keep it up
Thank you so much for saying that. What you just said has actually made my day! Thank you so much! Your level of awesomeness can't be recorded on any machine, and I don't think there will be a machine that will be able to accomplish such a task for many years.
So, in summary.
THANK YOU SO MUCH IT MEANS THE WORLD TO ME THAT YOU SAID THAT AND I'M GONNA SEND YOU A FRIEND REQUEST RIGHT NOW BECAUSE YOU'RE AWESOME!
haha that was actually really good. the smooth animation and nice texture feel made it evan better.
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
ewww. all was good except "that awkward kid " god what horible animations.
well i think the things you need to improve on is story, voice acting, lip synce, and animation. first ill say you dont need to improve art because what your doing will make you improve (tracing) the story makes no sense. if they got kicked out of the first place why would they go back? the lip syncing does not go with the voice at all . your voice actors also did a very terrible job and did not go with the charecters its distracting. the animation could also be much better such as more frame by frame work and such. thats prety much all i can think of right now
well that was actually realy good. i can see you take insperation from eddsworld and put some minor changes to them. however, the only thing i see wrong with the charecters are the hands. you should try practicing hands (mainly the thumbs, they look a little weird). another thing that i saw a little weird was alot of the charecters looked the same but with different hair color. i did realy enjoy this though and i realy hope to see more. the two things i meantioned was the only thing i could think was wrong
Thanks so much! I agree with both those statements and I am trying to work on them. Thanks for the really nice review, and the helpful comments!
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